Okay, so I'm a frequent user of Quizilla, and I read a lot of different stories on there, and write a little bit myself. I've started and gotten a pretty decent distance with my Davey Havok fan story. I figured I'd get some good feedback because I find a lot of those on there. But I haven't gotten a single comment, review, rating... nothing.

I are sad. :'(

So, in light of my depressive state, I'm going to post the link on here, hoping someone will read it and actually critique me. I like to know what people think of my writing. I know my English teachers have always loved my work, but how about regular people I've never met?

Anyway, if you're reading this and already bored with my whining, here's the story:


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And please leave me some feedback. If anyone requests it, I'll put the story up on here.