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About Me Member Varied Artist afisxfallxchild18/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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No one likes my story.

Wed Jan 20, 2010, 1:22 AM
Okay, so I'm a frequent user of Quizilla, and I read a lot of different stories on there, and write a little bit myself. I've started and gotten a pretty decent distance with my Davey Havok fan story. I figured I'd get some good feedback because I find a lot of those on there. But I haven't gotten a single comment, review, rating... nothing.

I are sad. :'(

So, in light of my depressive state, I'm going to post the link on here, hoping someone will read it and actually critique me. I like to know what people think of my writing. I know my English teachers have always loved my work, but how about regular people I've never met?

Anyway, if you're reading this and already bored with my whining, here's the story:


[link]

And please leave me some feedback. If anyone requests it, I'll put the story up on here.

  • Mood: Sadness
  • Listening to: Jeffree Star - Lollipop Luxury
  • Reading: Twilight by Stephanie Meyer
  • Eating: nothing but I'm starving.
  • Drinking: Chai Tea

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Devious Info

  • Interests: everything and anything
  • Favourite movie: Dracula 2000
  • Favourite band or musician: AFI ALL THE WAY BABY!
  • Favourite genre of music: rock punk idk
  • Favourite artist: M. C. Esher
  • Favourite poet or writer: Robert Frost - poet, Jane Austen or J. K. Rowling - Author
  • Operating System: Windows XP
  • MP3 player of choice: Ipod
  • Wallpaper of choice: AFI
  • Skin of choice: Green?
  • Favourite game: Tetris (on the original Nintendo system)
  • Favourite gaming platform: read above
  • Favourite cartoon character: Spongebob Squarepants
  • Personal Quote: "Life is too short for the world to have hate and anger in it. It's just not worth it.&
  • Tools of the Trade: ......pencils?

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:iconthnxplz:

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:iconluvusagi:
Thanks soo much for the :+fav:s i really appreciate it!

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:iconrosaplusfangs:
thank you so much for the fave :)

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:iconvika8d:
thank you for all the favs!
:iconkdotmdot:
Thanks for the AFI fav. I still have concert-hangover... Great live band they are.
:iconafisxfallxchild:
OH YES INDEED!!! lolz how long you been a fan?

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:iconkdotmdot:
I'm more in between casual fan/fan status nowadays (my sister's the real fan... she's in the DF and everything, even got to say a few words to Smith while waiting in line). But we've been listening to them since about 2001-2002. When did you discover 'em?
:iconafisxfallxchild:
Let's see... I got big on them my freshman year of high school which was.... 2003? I think... I'm so old.... lol. I'm in the DF too. I'm drastically obsessed with Davey... lolz

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